lifes joy

when it comes to life 

no one is the same 

we notice this 

at our youngest age 

as we grow up

we learn to smile 

yet the only time 

we truly smile 

is in the presence 

of thoughs who know 

the ones who know 

very little of the world 

the kids that make us smile 

make us learn 

and make us grow 

Reviews

[SarahV]

Nice poem! :)
Why not add some punctuation in some parts to make it more interesting. Keep up the good work!

[alex]

thank you for your advice