Valentines Day

Valentines Day

A Poem by Sally Edwards
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Thinking of tomorrow I wrote this 6 word poem.

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Eyes peek.........Lips seek........Knees weak

© 2008 Sally Edwards


Author's Note

Sally Edwards
Have changed the first part, thank you Erin peek is much better than meek :))

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such a penchant you have for short and simple, yet your poetry conveys so much with so little...

Good write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a cute poem to say and unveil so much about the feelings of love!
Great job!


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful way to sum up all of the tingly emotions and feelings one gets when Valentine's Day comes around!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

How delightful ... I told you that they become addictive.... :-))))

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think this conveys a good image for the most part. Something about the word "meek" is making me ponder over it longer than I should. :/

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 13, 2008
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Sally Edwards
Sally Edwards

United Kingdom



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Hi I'm single and new to poetry, am just browsing other poetry at the moment before plucking courage to upload my own. I am a hopeless romantic, cry at the silliest moments. I work in an office and my.. more..

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