Connections

When my thoughts begin to bleed

I can't compare the feeling of discovery

Being lost for so long

Some of us are really never here

The rest of us keep our heads up

And are able to walk through the fire

 

Reviews

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Hmm, this makes me think. I wish it were just a little bit more catchy or flowing because it would be even more interesting and thought provoking to read. Other than that little nit picky tip, I have to say "Hmm..." is all that goes through my mind. Keep up the good work!

[Citizen Erased]

This is fantastic. "When my thoughts begin to bleed" "Being lost for so long some of us are really never here"- very well written.