move on, sweet love

sweet
innocent love
innocent dreams
beautiful
colorful
you make my life
so much brighter
when you are not with me
my bones ache for you
my love for you
radiates through my entire being

everyday i wish
that you felt
one ounce of love for me
but you never will
because i will always be your second

move on, sweet love
you have been nothing but cruel
i'll never bee good enough for you

[she said she won the world, at a carnival. but she could never win me.]

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

Sometimes its best to just start anew.

Really enjoyed this, I know this feeling well.

Antonio

[Marie Harrison]

Oh this is sweet like honey. Nice job Oklahoma! A great poem.

[gomjordan23]

I've definitely felt like this before. The funny thing is that even when a person makes you feel this way, in a way you're still somewhat grateful for that experience. Just knowing that another person can make you feel such intense emotions is sorta rewarding. At least that's how it was for me anyway.