Colour of the Silhouette

just experimenting with imagery

Just like every other person decides to cross the lake on their own,

she traps you within,

have you heard the tales of a living nymph?

her beauty is beyond words and harmless, as they say.

God, she could even bring colours to the silhouette.

with her long, minimal locks of gold hair,

she illuminates the entire sea.

Noon is the time,

when she swims with pure elegance.

her luminescent fingertips touch the ocean floor,

and a carnation is born.

she wears them on her body as a sign of love.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'she swims with pure elegance.
her luminescent fingertips touch the ocean floor,
and a carnation is born.
she wears them on her body as a sign of love.'

Four perfect lines to describe your living nymph. Many thanks for sharing them with your readers. Sameeksha. Soon to read more of your poetry.

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Thank you so much Emma, your time and this review means a lot to me. Have a great day :)

[emmajoygreen]

I have had a great day, now's the time to slow down and think of sleep! Hope your tomorrows are happy and peaceful, my new friend

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Thank you, I wish you the same

[emmajoygreen]

A smile is on its way to you! :)

[mou]

Your imagery and the artistic colors are so beautiful and gorgeous!! I can see and feel the beauty of 'She' from your eloquent words. I love it
- mou

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Dear mou, My heartfelt thanks to you for your time. I am so glad you liked the imagery. I truly appreciate your support, my friend. Thank you so much once again!

Have a beautiful day!

[mou]

You're very welcome, Sameeksha. Have a lovely day :)

[Brad Dehler]

Beautiful illustration in this poem, i enjoyed the fantasy entangled with the tangibles. Nice work

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Thank you so much for your time and reviewing on my poem, Brad. I am glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day :)

[Amy R]

WOW, U did justice here, with the way u portrayed a beautiful nymph to be,
exactly how she is I am sure.. I am looing forward to reading more of your poems,
imagery on point, very beautiful write.
-Amy

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Thank you so much, Amy I truly appreciate your encouraging feedback. Your comment means a lot to me. :)

[Amy R]

You're very welcome!

[DIVYA]

Dear Sameeksha,
A very breathtaking portrait of a nymph. You have such a beautiful imagination. Her hair illuminates the sea and she wears the carnations her touch creates. I read spellbound and am so impressed! It will be great to read more of your poetry.

[Sameeksha Vadisherla]

Dear Divya, Thank you so much for your time and your incredibly kind words. Your comment means a lot to me! :)

[DIVYA]

You're most welcome, dear Sameeksha.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry. You have something beautiful to offer the world.