In my mind

In my mind

A Poem by Akki
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This poem is on that which every thoughts in my mind when I written & after it. I hope it makes good.

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I wrote stories & poems,
That understand every individual.

I imagine everything that I could,
I wrote something that I should.

But, review on it low,
my confidence now goes slow.

I try to understand my mistakes,
That I avoid to good content makes.

But, I don't know what I make mistakes,
There are so many views.
really I am good in this stake,
I hope some gives me reviews.

I wrote stories & poems,
That understand every individual.

© 2016 Akki


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Author's Note

Akki
Give me reviews on what you feel when reading my poems. If is it bad tell me that If it is good to tell me, What kind of your reviews doesn't matter but to get reviews that matter.

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Featured Review

The poem has a good subject - the need for a writer to get feedback and to be valued.

Perhaps the grammar needs to be checked - and then it will be an even better poem?

These are the best lines to my ear: 'I imagine everything that I could,
I wrote something that I should'

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Solar. I was written this poem when I didn't get any review so I frustrated and just write w.. read more
Solar

5 Years Ago

For example - in the first stanza -if it is stories and poems in plural, then you don't need 'a'. an.. read more
Akki

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Solar... I really like...



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The poem has a good subject - the need for a writer to get feedback and to be valued.

Perhaps the grammar needs to be checked - and then it will be an even better poem?

These are the best lines to my ear: 'I imagine everything that I could,
I wrote something that I should'

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akki

5 Years Ago

Thanks, Solar. I was written this poem when I didn't get any review so I frustrated and just write w.. read more
Solar

5 Years Ago

For example - in the first stanza -if it is stories and poems in plural, then you don't need 'a'. an.. read more
Akki

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Solar... I really like...

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Added on January 11, 2016
Last Updated on January 15, 2016
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Akki
Akki

Pune, Maharashtra,India., Hindu, India



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