The 10 words

Like those drained words, nothing makes sense, remains only a hollow LETTER
The same harsh noise like the empty UTENSIL,it makes, or even greater
It is just a TICKLE to your life from the destiny
Like the lonely STARFISH,that gleams,always pronouncing our company
The emotions now, gone SPARSE all the way through
Like that PALOMINO, still sweet for almost entire crew
I defend my failure through the CANOPY of my thoughts
To protest amongst my ideas, to fight for my KINGDOM against all lots
You were there, ABREAST about the happenings, didn't find anything linking
Alas! You need to take to your WHEEL, the thought of your thinking!

Reviews

[Surya]

Using ten words..u created a charm..I enjoyed..:)

[Wicahpi]

Thank you for taking the 10 Words I Give challenge! I appreciate the effort, very much. Some words I find are placed uniquely, others I am not sure about, for example the 'utensil' compared to a harsh noise. Could be my old mind. I found this to be creative indeed.

[Taz]

A very interesting poem it is. I liked it. Very well done though I am not sure why certain words are capitalized if you could please enlighten me that would be great.

[Wicahpi]

They are the 10 words needed in my contest _ 10 Words I Give _ some bold the words, some use color, some underline. This writer chose to Capitalize the words.

[Taz]

Ah I see thank you.

[Wicahpi]

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/10-Words-I-Give/53982/