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A Poem by SammMG

Love is confusing. I don't know if being a boy or a teen amplifies this... but it really is just confusing.


How can love be best described? 

Possibly as a glitch in this otherwise bearable system? 

The thought that we have error from conception 

From the outset that there is a type of bug infiltrated into us

That we're set from the start to be diverged by emotion

Makes the idea of love, one to be unsure of

For sometimes we love

 And for that moment we are enveloped by warmth

Yet sometimes it leaves

 And we're left to nothing but our own devices

When everything simply just fails

The only option is to simply pick up and move on

Truly one who has a right mind would never set themselves up for this type of pain

A certain type of failure that can hurt just so much

But then again we're not perfect

As we all have some type of glitch in what could be a perfect system

© 2015 SammMG

Author's Note

I made this in between classes so please forgive any big glaring mistakes.

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Oh wow.. I felt like i just read hamlet of the 21st century. :D
A bug indeed -- but a disease worth getting sick. :D
i wish you my young friend your best endeavors while you try to understand this emasculate journey to love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend :)
These are the truest lines! I loved the poem, sir! And I also like it that you write in free verse, that way your emotions stay true.
Good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


8 Years Ago

Thank you! Everything I've posted on here so far are just ideas that came to me throughout the day t.. read more
Maumil Mehraj

8 Years Ago

True....Same thing happens with me. I guess all 17 year olds are the same :)

8 Years Ago

Nah, we all have our own little quirks that make each of us similar, yet special in our own way :)

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2 Reviews
Added on April 18, 2015
Last Updated on April 30, 2015
Tags: computer, system, glitch, love, perfect, imperfect



Hebbronville, TX

Just your average 17 year old with his head in the clouds. I do my best to keep up with everyone's writing, but if there's anything anyone would want me to read just send a Read Request or a messag.. more..

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