Suspicious Undreamt Girl

Suspicious Undreamt Girl

A Poem by Samantha Ashley*
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stunning brunette slim red dress curvy lips red as a rose eyes like daggers their so sharp. You'll be her dessert at the end of the night.

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Dark haired girl known for beauty,

like a red, red rose.

Her eyes full of lust and love,

looking for the next turtle dove.

She wants romance,

then again her men always disappear.

Been involved with the mysterious cases.

Nobody suspects her

besides the mystery men.

She is curvy like the next Marilyn Monroe,

always have a show.

Seen with many men a night,

Never puts up a fight.

Strong and independent this one,

Waiting for her next move.

Always have a plan,

with a different man.

Takes them to her place where theres no escape.

Screams and yells are said,

doesn't get paid.

She cuts and strips them,

while their blood flows like a stream.

Flows down their body into a crystal glass,

Can we say first class.

People never mention the cries from her place,

if so, she'll cover them in a body massacre.

Known for her beauty,

also a total mystery.

Not a girl next door,

seeks to get men more.

To fill her bloody appetite,

to her next deadly bite.

A girl in a red, slim dress.

Glowing, stunning goddess

beautiful locks, drenched red lips.

try not to stare

she'll have you at her next hungry bite.

© 2008 Samantha Ashley*


Author's Note

Samantha Ashley*
Its kinda weird and odd but the ending needs work, tell me what you think!

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I love it It's like I could see her standing next to me Nice Job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


An interesting little story here about this predatory female and the men she loves and perhaps kills. Have you ever thought about turning this into a short story? It might work well that format too. Good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


hehehe hungry much?


Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on December 19, 2008

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Samantha Ashley*
Samantha Ashley*

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I am 21 years old, and attending a community college. It seems like forever until I'm done with school. I love to write especially about my feelings and emotions; I try to let the reader feel what I .. more..

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