Emptiness all around

Puzzled mind, wandering soul,

Life looks nomadic without you!

Aimless I roam, emotionless I live;

Hopeful I sit, praying to unite again…

Just like the sky, empty without stars;

My soul feels so empty without you.

I relinquish time spent together;

Picking up memories, living it mentally;

But alas! All of it is only in my mind,

Every sound, all sights remind me of you;

I wish to travel to meet you again;

Free from chains of responsibilities,

I wish to live us again!

Reviews

[Riddhi]

Ah...That's really a nice poem...Seems like all of them are your actual feelings...You know whenever you do anything by putting all your soul and heart in it , it always becomes the best and this is just it...When i read your poem , i can feel everything although i never had such experience!!!You know i always like writing something constructive in my review but this poem is perfect in everything...I indeed liked every line and the way you carved all your emotions through your words in this poem made it the best poem i have read today ...Good job ...
Keep it up...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...
Riddhi

[Minerva]

Reading this I could feel the emotions. A pang in my chest. This poem has a way of making a person draw on there own emotions. Almost draw on their own fear of loss.

[Najam Us Saher]

So relatable. I really liked this.