of art

i guesse it can be interpreted as romantica and all but i didnt mean for it to be that way....its about how my really good friend is able to look at me assess wat im feeling and is able to make it better.

he sculpted me with his touch,

graphed me with his gaze,

     animated me

with his comprehension

           of life.

Author's Note

as usual all comments (critique especially) are welcome and aperciated. thank you!

Reviews

[nocturnalbeast]

i loved this!!!
utterly brilliant!.

[Mr. Misanthrope]

A nice, short, sweet poem, that strikes the reader in the heart, puncturing it with reality and the common knowledge that some people understand you, and others don't. A good read!

-Luke

[Jason Henry]

hey you're terrific! i found your poem to be succinct, yet powerful, yet accurate, even though i dont know your friend...
"animated me
with his comprehension
of life."---> i thought that was tremendously brilliant...