rain unclaimed

rain unclaimed

A Poem by sara

written on one of those bad days

Every day
the second period after lunch
is chem.

I am in the middle of pretending to care
about electromagnetivity and such
when all of a sudden
it starts to pour
and thunder
and I realize (with burning intensity)
that i need to be outside.

I need the rain to beat out this
fire of despair thats in me..

No, i realize a second later
I dont merely want to feel it
Im not going to be content with that little touch
one little graze
I want to become it
I want to become a rain drop
Just one of the anonymouse thousands
that glide and crash and soar from the tangible sky
Like acrobatic troops perform on their highwires
I want to be one of those blessed raindrops
that just fall
without a dout
or a fear
And when I become that raindrop
And if I become that raindrop,
unrecognizable from the countless others
melting into the background, the foreground completely air bound

And when....and if...
and if i pelt down from the sky
like mini comets
or missiles
that make one lasting explosion
one splash on this world
before snaking and dripping
and sneaking away
into nothing.

© 2009 sara

Author's Note

all reviews, comments, and crtisicms are welcome and appreciated
thank you!

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this is so good.. sometimes i also want to stop time and make everything surreal..
like, sometimes, i want to break off from the worldly mayhems of my everyday life and go somewhere else where no one knows me and i can truly be myself.. =)
i like this composition.. congratulations! ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on June 15, 2009



clifton, NJ

right these mini bio things always come out awkward on my end so lets get it over with im sara, almost 17 and a highschool senior i love escaping into a good book (or even a semi good book) running .. more..

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