Wilt

first poem..........

You tore me apart and left me

alone to cry

and wander what I did wrong.

 

You left me

like that

wilting rose.

 

That was long

ago, but I still

remember.

 

Betrayal,

and hate

is what I feel.

 

Are you still

happy with

yourself?

 

Well, look at me now.

Author's Note

yes its horrible lol but i just wanted to write it......

Reviews

[Lunar Lightning]

I'm going to have to say that I disagree with you. This is not horrible. I liked it actually, but it got me to thinking about some advise I could never take myself, but I also feel obligated to say it. Enjoy the fact that someone could make you hurt, for that means that they made you equally as happy. It may not make much sense to you, but it seems to make sense to me... I'm trying out the whole optomism thing....

Luna

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

wow! you did soooo amazing for your first poem! A+++++ !!! xD

[Domo]

Why would you say it's horrible, the only time someones poem is horrible, is when they say it's horrible. Besides, I thought you did pretty good for a first poem. The more you write, the better you get! ☺
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