Us

Pictures of us spread out on my floor

All i ever wanted was you

Never anything more

With each kiss our love grew

You made my soul soar

And the feelings i had for you were brand new

To you my heart I would pour

 

But that fateful day in May

All that changed

My heart turned gray

We were once in love but now estranged

I still wish I was with you even today

One day we were supposed to be engaged

But all of that changed in one sad day

Author's Note

haha it was my sad attempt at ryhming. it didn't go well lol

Reviews

[Star Shyne]

very nicely done! really enjoyed it. but, you spelled "ever" as "eve" in the second line.

[Jeff Miller]

You actually did a good job! It's really good and it's locked on my phone! Hoorah for Soorah!