The Proposal

I wrote this on a beach. I wanted my partner to propose to me so thought of writing a poem to leave for him to find. He never did propose but instead asked me to get engaged which we subsequently are.

As I were looking out to sea
The waves o'er rocks did break
If I closed my eyes and thought awhile
My thoughts, the sea did take
They took me to a place far away
To lands only I can see
In my mind I heard your tender voice 
Saying 'will you marry me?'

Author's Note

Please leave comments. I thought it would be nice as a Valentine's poem.

Reviews

[WoolSocks]

Very sweet and the rhymes feel so light and airy! You are very right: this makes a wonderful Valentine's poem. And congratulations, by the way!