Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by Sarah Lynn
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The season of fall

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Autumn leaves swirl beneath my feet
No more green amongst these trees 
The light cool breeze swooshes past
The scent of pumpkin pie throughout the house, forever lasts
Oh how i love this season.

© 2013 Sarah Lynn


Author's Note

Sarah Lynn
I wanted to make one of the fairly short yet sweet poems.

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I wish that it could last forever. Short and sweet just as Autumn intends. The beauty of it is sweeping but only lasts a brief moment before the chill comes. Good write

Posted 10 Years Ago


A good description of the season... made me imagine it.... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


An awesome commentary on my favorite season of the four. :) Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much !
This is beautiful and also pumpkin pie is amazing!! lol great job kido :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


Smiles:) loved it:) I love this time of year too the pumpkin pie thing didn't help matters lol cause ill have to make one of go get one later:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

10 Years Ago

Thank you Im glad you liked it (:
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10 Years Ago

Yes very fitting Sarah:)
Look what you did. Now I want Pumpkin pie. That's my favorite pie, with only apple coming in a close second.

This is a nice, short poem. It has the right amount of..."home" in it for me and the first three lines nail the feel of the season's weather. My only foible is that that the "I" should be capitalized. Other than that you did well.

-Caradoc

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarah Lynn

10 Years Ago

Well thank you ! Ill be sure to capitalize that and pumpkin pie is my favorite too!
Caradoc

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. It was a nice pleasant read, reminding me of why I like Autumn, and October in parti.. read more

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Added on October 29, 2013
Last Updated on October 29, 2013
Tags: fall, autumn, colorful, trees, leaves, chilly, pumpkin, pie

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Sarah Lynn
Sarah Lynn

Rochester, NY



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