Autumn

The season of fall

 

Autumn leaves swirl beneath my feet

No more green amongst these trees 

The light cool breeze swooshes past

The scent of pumpkin pie throughout the house, forever lasts

Oh how i love this season.

Author's Note

I wanted to make one of the fairly short yet sweet poems.

Reviews

[Kenaz]

I wish that it could last forever. Short and sweet just as Autumn intends. The beauty of it is sweeping but only lasts a brief moment before the chill comes. Good write

[Jordan]

A good description of the season... made me imagine it.... :)

[Fadedspeak]

An awesome commentary on my favorite season of the four. :) Good work!

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you so much !

[David]

This is beautiful and also pumpkin pie is amazing!! lol great job kido :P

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Smiles:) loved it:) I love this time of year too the pumpkin pie thing didn't help matters lol cause ill have to make one of go get one later:)

[Sarah Lynn]

Thank you Im glad you liked it (:

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Yes very fitting Sarah:)

[Caradoc]

Look what you did. Now I want Pumpkin pie. That's my favorite pie, with only apple coming in a close second.

This is a nice, short poem. It has the right amount of..."home" in it for me and the first three lines nail the feel of the season's weather. My only foible is that that the "I" should be capitalized. Other than that you did well.

-Caradoc

[Sarah Lynn]

Well thank you ! Ill be sure to capitalize that and pumpkin pie is my favorite too!

[Caradoc]

You're welcome. It was a nice pleasant read, reminding me of why I like Autumn, and October in particular.