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I had to get it all out! What I really feel about a certain someone, raw truth.

 I hate that stupid tweed jacket you wear.

It doesn't make you look smart.

It makes you look like an idiot.

 

I hate the way you think that is the right way to kiss,

And those judging looks you gave me when I drank red wine.

 

I hate that stupid "confused" look you have on your face when I say something you don't agree with...

I don't give a f**k what you think.

 

I think it's really hypocritical that you complain about your inhability to dress fashionably,

Yet you criticize those who can pull it off.

 

You always cut your hair too short,

Can't you see it looks like a f*****g mushroom?

 

I cannot stand it when you call me "Pet," in such a patronising tone.

I'm not a child, And if you think I am, then you should have thought twice about using me for sex.

You really are just like the rest of them.

 

I hate it that you never talk to your friends about me.

What am I? Some kind of dark immoral secret?

 

I hate the way you describe things in too much detail,

It turns my stomach, you know?

 

I think your thumbs are weird.

 

I hate it that you always told me I was beautiful,

And that I could get anyone I wanted.

I only want you, you imbecile.

 

I hate it when you get offended by everything I say,

You hurt me all the f*****g time.

 

I hate you for not going to that concert with me.

(I bought the tickets and everything, You didn't know that, did you?)

 

Why don't you ever leave the house for me?

Am I that embarrassing?

 

I hate the way you never seem to learn from your mistakes.

 

It pissed me off that I always had to initiate our conversations.

 

I hate the way you described her feet as "Tiny and warm."

Don't talk about her around me...

It makes me feel like s**t.

 

I hate the way I never lived up to your expectations.

 

It hurt that you never went out of your way for me.

 

I hate the way you never took an interest in me,

And that you always took me for granted.

 

You never meant it when you said sorry.

 

I hate the way you didn't reply to my goodbye letter for two weeks.

 

I also hate that you replied at all,

I was starting to feel better you inconsiderate b*****d.

 

I hate the way you've changed.

(It was probably my fault for showering you with compliments as you cried on my shoulder - remember that?)

 

I wish I had never met you,

You repulse me...

 

I think about you every day.

 

Every minute, every day.

Every afternoon, every week, 

Every movie, every tune,

Every day, Last friday,

Every night, at 2AM,

Every coffee, every train ride,

 

Every...

 

Every second,

Every second,

Every second.

 

I am thinking about you now,

I'll think about you forever.

 

To me, you are perfect.

 

Reviews

[Bubo]

What can I say??All the traits of someone utterly in love but wishes they weren't....such raw anger.......
cannot stand it when you call me "Pet" in such a patronising tone.
I'm not a child, and if you think I am, then you should have thought twice about using me for sex.
You really are just like the rest of them.

Well written!
The ending was perfect......of course you realise the anger is a cover for true feelings!!
Imbecile................

loved it
well done!

[Vansgirlrocks]

wow wow wow!
damn thats all I can say
WOW!
OMG
this poem should be called

"I hate"
cuz you use that word alot aha

[Christine]

WOW! That is incredible! We have all felt like that about someone in our lives at one time or another. You wrote this perfectly. We feel your anger, your betrayal, your hurt. I hope you got out some of your anger.

Very well written!!
~Christine :-)

[Karrar]

Every word....EVERY SINGLE WORD...is true. No matter how much you curse the one you want to forget, you know you just can't. You love them too much to do so.

[~amanda~]

amazing. thats all i can say. this is by far the best poem i have read on here


fabulous.

[Lexy]

The beginning, I'm sorry, but I was laughing. It sounded so true, like something someone should AlWAYS say when that happens. It wasn't funny, I swear.
I wasn't expecting the ending, kudos to you.
Maybe you should call it "Every Second" or something like that.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like this poem it has so much pain in it to me .. and i can understand the 'hate' for certain things.. especially being called 'Pet'.. this moved me .. you really let go at the end ... all the times you think about him..
Very nice..

Chloe
xoxo

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

a great read, creative. enjoyed this.

thanks for submitting.

Rayne

[HoWiE]

Yeah, this is great. It's one of the few poems in my contest that I've actually smiled at whilst reading. It's full of raw, unrepentant feelings and humourously tackled observations. It's a fabulous read that says so much, 'how much I can't stand the fact that I love you'. It's amazing how someone can sometimes crawl into our heads and remain there for so long, festering and simmering beneath the surface or simply just lodged there like a splinter. I think you've captured all these conflicting thoughts perfectly, I liked this, I really did. Good work, thanks for entering my contest and good luck! HoWiE

[Theta S. T.]

Break up are the hardest things to get over because depending on how long you've been together your whole life revolved around that one person, even if they annoyed the hell out of you but even at that all those this that annoyed you are the things you miss the most. I like how you went from the all of the bad things to everything you missed for a while there I thought it was going to be like a he screwed me over thing but it wasn't....

my favorate lines in this piece are

"You always cut your hair too short,
Can't you see it looks like a f*****g mushroom?"

~~Theta

[Lainie W]

Occasionally when surfing randomly, you find a real gem - and this is truly a great read.
You let the reader know the why of the complexity of your feelings
from beginning to end....and love the end