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Love Me Not
1986, Penny Herrera falls into the predatory clutches of Matt, an older man who has no other intention than to alter Pen

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CAF'E

CAF'E

A Poem by Imperfect xo
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this is a poem about what you see in a caf'e

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Warm smell of coffee lingering in the air

happy smiling face sitting everywhere

i sit back, take a deep breath and think,

coffee and freshness what may be the link?

© 2011 Imperfect xo


Author's Note

Imperfect xo
hey reviewers this si a short poem but if you have any ideas of what i should add to it please tell me

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The rhyming is good. The other thing is that you got mixed up with 'maybe'. It should be 'may be'. Good work again. Keep going. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 25, 2011
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Imperfect xo
Imperfect xo

Milton Keynes, Buckinghamshire, United Kingdom



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Hey guys, well, i enjoy writing as you can see, but my work isn't the best... I have no inspiration, i just WRITE not many of you will understand this, but any new ideas, message me and ill be sure to.. more..

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