3 Words

3 Words

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I've been waiting you to tell you these 3 words..

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Cause I'm flaking my feelings towards you,
I hope they get across successfully.
I've been waiting you to tell you these 3 words.
They mean the world to me,
speaking the hearts of thousands of girls.
Maybe you'll understand,
or you'll leave right away.
Taking those steps out to the world,
or staying in weeping motion.
Young love is sweet, 
like a pink lollipop; 
when's Valentine's Day?
I don't know how to describe,
but I'll tell you the best I can.
The only one waiting, 
is definitely me.
I'll tell the world now,
and only just once.
Please understand;
I'm over you..

© 2011 ☯


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Interesting twist at the end! I was expecting the words "I love you" at the end but was surprised to read the words "I'm over you"

Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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