you and me

you and me

A Poem by s.n.srivastava

                                                 You and me

 

Did I text you last night? oh!  My phone was drunk,no…..

Did I saw you? Oh! It was not my eye…..

Did I say you? Oh! My lips were anxious…….

Did I hear you? Oh! I wanted that……

Did I apologize? Oh! It was me…..

 

You on the horns of dilemma, or

You on the horns on clarity, or

You on the horns of advices, or

You on the horns of anger, or

You on the horns of calmness……..

 

 I listened the old brag of my heart

I’m  I’m  I’m

You listen to your present brag of heart…..

You’r   you’r   you ‘r……..

 

 

By- s.n.srivastava

 

© 2016 s.n.srivastava


Author's Note

s.n.srivastava
say whatever you feel

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mou
very well ..a good style of writing where emotions get equal importance..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a coherence embedded in this poem about a fragmented conflicted communication

Posted 8 Years Ago


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patna, bihar, India



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i m satyam narayan srivastava , 20 year old boy ... i like to give words to ups and down of life. i like poems and other literature works... i like and love writing ..... more..

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