Dracula.

Dracula.

A Poem by saviorys
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Dracula and the one who loves him.

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Savior.

Love is not worth the withstand
Thousand then thousand of years
It is something I will never understand
Losing you, I can't give you no tears

One bite and you feel the numbness in my heart
Come with Dracula, rule with my power
I know nothing about love, feel nothing from the start
Soulless since the dark hour

Darkness fills the shadows
Venom in my blood
Can't see no reflection, I'm hollow
Prince of darkness, evil in my vain flood


Pinz.


Flowing time,
Fiery sky;
Does God play dime?
No one knows.

Strong heart, strong soul
Seem so impenetrable.
Even more stubborn is the want
To love gently with a whole heart.

Wants to love you,
Wants to hold you;
But I can't
Have God forsake me?

No, my dear.
I am here, for you.
Gentle but not weak,
Let me cast a light into your darkness.

No, my love.
I have love you too much.
I will not let you,
We are of different world.

It does not matter,
I hear your heart calling.
Cast off your fear,
For I am coming here.

No! Take me off now,
For I can suffer no longer.
My love is complete now
I know God is here.

God is always here, my dear
That is why I am here
For you, for now and forever
Rest well, my love now and ever.

© 2009 saviorys


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Love is not worth ,thousands of years,something I will never understand
Losing you ,but I cant give you tears,one bite and all the numbness in my heart
Know nothing about love,it rules from the start,soulless always been
Darkness fills the shadows,Venom in my blood,evil in my vain flood
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Love is not worth ,thousands of years,something I will never understand
Losing you ,but I cant give you tears,one bite and all the numbness in my heart
Know nothing about love,it rules from the start,soulless always been
Darkness fills the shadows,Venom in my blood,evil in my vain flood
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting. But I have to ask, is this two different poems put together or one? If it is one, it tends to get a bit confusing after the Pinz part starts. Not confusing in itself, but confusing in comparison with the first part of the piece. Not bad overall though.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Scarborough, Canada



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