Re : Do you think about me?

I think about you
after all I've been through
you dried the tears off my shoe
no guys ever had a clue
it was destined to be you
all day on the phone
I'm sticking to you like glue
now this relationship is something new
letting my guarded as the days grew
you could be the one who share my view

I don't need your visa
but it will be nice to be your mona lisa
You said I was your star
shining bright light but just a little far
forgetting about my past scar
with that little eskimo kiss that is our
Damn these memories
simple days, but so much to miss
the flowers are holding me onto this
the love are folding me towards his
never thought I would ever feel like this
never wanted this pain to exist
every geography on me waits for his kiss
risking my all for what might be, well this is

so baby
don't think too much of it
we're like a jigsaw
far apart, but never split
thinking about you
is something that I'll never quit

Reviews

[Holly]

I really like the use of your words on a few of these poems but maybe you could try and mix it up or rhyme less? Each rhyme is almost like a new story which is nice but each one also has that entire potential of it's own and I would love to see where it could be taken if explored?