Hymn

It is a french verse which is called Kyrielle

My unforgiving sins have swallowed my soul.

I tried my Best to avoid them, but I couldn’t roll

To escape from the Satan’s ecstasy’s in his

God! How can I face you now?

 

Your route expels with the paradise of love

My wrong turn in the middle of my story is dove

Turned away my eye from you,

God! How can I face you now?

 

My madness outlived your rules.

Now I wonder who will pardon me.

No, No, it wasn’t me, I will cry at your court.

God! How can I face you now?

 

Treasures of your mercy locked

By your sexless and sinless angles,

They never knocked my door

God, How Can I face you now?

 

The last pain the sweetest and sad

On earth to all of us, Deliverance

From this world, finally appears in new journey

God! How can I face you now?

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

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:: a very earnest piece of writing... although i feel God (whether one believes God is an energy, entity or metaphor) is very generous, accepting and forgiving...

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

Thank you for stoping by and reviewing my poem and it needs some correction.On the other day the terrible lady from united states told me to edit it and add more syllables.

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:: no one is terrible, my friend... some people understand and some people don't understand... i don't take any criticism personally... nor do i accept it if it doesn't make sense to me...