HIDDEN

Between the lines hidden,
the love of a broken soul.
the existence of hate,
the need for acceptance.


Unheard were the intentions,
unknown were the emotions.
words can be spoken
but the broken won't recover.


the stars must come down,
catch one with a frown.
wishes not granted,
worse place to be enchanted.


be calm with a seranade,
reality still complicates.
is it the truth that is being hated?
or the extreme love which is outdated.

So much for belief,
to make someone believe,
when one is deceive,
suddenly they leave.


bad current flow,
just emotions that oveflowed.
when secrets are hidden deep below,
you'll find revenge when they're slow.

Reviews

[Chris]

The ties that bind are everywhere,
and the fingertips lie every night.
The tear dampened pillow doesn't hug back
- I even miss sharing my nightmares...

[Scarlet Alice]

thank u for posting a comment
^~^)v

[Scarlet Alice]

thank u for posting a comment
^~^)v

[Chris]

Understanding is easy to say and so hard to show - unless you do understand. Take care.

[Rob Santana]

Sadness expressed in a passionate way. Nicely done.

[Scarlet Alice]

Thank you so much ^~^

[Roger Turgeon]

There is real sadness here. I'm happy you can write this down and not keep it hidden.

[Scarlet Alice]

thank you for the review ^~^ really appreaciate it... :)
poetry is always one of the best way to keep one calm :3 its quite a shallow situation tho that leads me to writing something too deep XD

[WILDERNESS]

v nice, deep and soulful..........

[Scarlet Alice]

Thank you ^~^