If you were a dream

If you were a dream

A Poem by Aishwarya Subramanian

Love. Deep. So good.


It’s like I never met you

Because you are so good to be true

Swinging between life and dreams

My life is a movie-it seems.


Never could fathom why we met

You are life’s best bet

It’s like I never met you before

You are like a happy beach shore


I know I love you

When I kiss your face

When you caress my hair maze

I like your shoes too


You are the dream I never had

You are the perfect lad

You are better than any he

You are for me.


If it was a dream only

I could never feel you

Kiss me so gently

M’glad the dream isn’t you.


 In your dwelling resides my loving heart

Until death could do us apart

It’s like I never met you

Because you are so good to be true

© 2012 Aishwarya Subramanian

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Speaking about emotion- i can feel the youthful yearning and enthusiasm in this piece... The excitement of the persona and deep infatuation! It's a very very cute read

Posted 8 Years Ago

Even the shoes. That is true love. I like the flow of the story and the happiness of love expressed in this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on February 4, 2012
Last Updated on February 4, 2012


Aishwarya Subramanian
Aishwarya Subramanian

Melbourne, FL

I like writing. But I can't write very often. I need a lot of inspiration to write again. I am a bit of a perfectionist. I toss away poems that are not good enough in my eyes. Lets101 Quizzes - O.. more..