Broken

Unlock these chains called

Friendship and just set me free

No more this choice of

Kinship do I seek from thee

 

The yearnings that i ever endure

Tears at me, makes me pine

Each time I look upon your face

And know that you'll never be mine

 

I wither and die inside

A bit more from day to day

Understanding that we are wrong

Still can't help feeling this way

 

The vastness of the void i feel

Threatens to swallow me whole

My love for you grows stronger

It stretches to the depths of my soul

 

I implore you, I beseech you

Please let us now part

Come end my suffering tonight

And relinquish my heart

Reviews

[Michael X]

Wow, I loved this Angela, the flow has a captivating word pattern as well as
the emotional passion weaving your words as a blanket covering the heart
with pain and a desire to want to be from from the grasp of a lover's fair.

[Valorie J. Shearer]

I too have known that pain! This is a great write Angela, greatly expressed! Take care~~~

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Great work - I know these feelings very well - you have really captured the essence of loving someone even though it may not be working for one reason or another. Great job. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Enigma]

Strong and powerful lines up there!! Nice poem, indeed.Superb word choice.Good flow to it...
Well Done!!

[M. Amphet Salt]

Hey this is very good. Makes me sad though....

Good choice of form, good choice of words. There is good rhythm.

There is good emotions set in to impart the message.

It also has a message universally relatable.

This is a good read.