Bitter-Sweet

The first taste of love was bitter for me
It's start with with happiness
All the way through
And ending in tragic
Me leaving you
I do not regret it
If that's what you think
But when I think of it myself
Tears fall out my eyes as soon as I blink
Blurring vision
Flash backs
Horrible goodbyes
But the consquence of leaving you
Was the being being deprived
Being deprived of all the good times
~
My first love had broken my heart
Not in his words
Not from his mouth
I was just told by a friend
No proper way
Was I not better?
I still wonder
I wonder when I left
What I became to you
What I did I become?
~
You fooled me
Fooled me by your sweet words
First kisses
and fake love
Yet I forgive you
I do not know why
You hear my tone
My tone of voice
Calm and precise and peaceful
If only you knew that all of this story
Is not what you think
It was everything that made me
What I am today
And what I am today
is better than him
but I still wonder
Does he ever think of me?
I suppose I won't find out
~
My first taste of love was bitter to me
But now all I see is that it was
Bitter-Sweet

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

Great job. I think we all feel the same way wondering " Does he ever think of me?" Easy to relate to with a good flow and emotion showing through. Powerful. Heartbreaking because I know how it is and I know a lot of people that have went through a lot of the same things so don't worry you're not alone. Great job though, loved it. Awesome. Keep writing! :D

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Beautiful work. Your works are very intelligent, passionate, and full of meaning. Keep up the great writing! :-)

[dina[saur]]

heartbreaking!! literally almost started to cry bc i soo know how going through something like this feels!!
this was great!!

[Michael X]

heartbreaking and a bittersweet symphony plays to the readers ear, a sense of
broken trust and perhaps gaining isdom, or building a wall around the heart,
the agonizing sense of betrayal really brings your words to life, as far as form,
consistant and captures attention, a worthy all around poem of stature,
you did an excellent job, keep it up.