Mine Hearts Door

 

Come to me mine blossom divine
Come to me and put your hand in mine

Let our hearts melt into the blue
Let me show love of the truest hue

Your my hearts desire my only bliss
You set me free and gave me this kiss

Your life in my hand your love in my heart
Let us be together never falling apart

Lay down beside you and hold you forever
Lay down beside me and keep me together

Mine love will not diminish nor fade away
My heart only grows fonder each and every day

My love and my bliss only to you I give
Poring through hearts open door as a sieve.

Another from 06

Dec 18, 2010

Author's Note

Please critique

Reviews

[London]

The fifth and seventh stanzas really hit home, really good read

[...]

Romantic words. The last two lines confuse me. "I'll take no other to be my own. For what I did will never happen again."

[Kestrova]

I enjoyed reading this poem, it had a steady rhyming scheme and the rhythm flowed smoothly. However, I had to reread the fifth stanza to fully comprehend it. Maybe I'm just tired, but otherwise it's a really good read! :)