Clique In A Circle No More

  We all have our cirlce

We all have our life

We all have our cliques

 

 We  all live in that circle

We all, just barely live

We all except only certain people

 

      It's time

 

 Draw a new circle

We are who we are

Just except without judgement

 

 Broaden our horizons

Live with intent

Open our world to those we dont except

 

    Do something differant

 

 Even on the web, we circle

Especially on the web, we live

Forget it, it's stupid

 

 We know it is

Yet still we don't

We try but fail

 

    Live outside the circle

 

 There is no box

There is no cirle

Only people.

 

   No one is perfect

 

 Live outside the cirle

Distroy what should not be

Except people for what they are, flawed!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

We all have our lives containing the circles and cliques that we run round in. We should - Broaden our horizons Live with intent Open our world to those we don't accept Step outside of the circle............get rid of what shouldn't be.......Accept people as they are.......imperfect!

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

no, not flawed. unrealised.

[Lily Mae]

It reminds me of an onion....the layers that peel away and each part represents a part of the whole..x the inner core holding those who are dear...and on and on.. I really enjoyed reading this... an excellent write...x

[AndyJCash]

Be careful about your spelling, it took away from me what was an otherwise exceptional and brilliant poem!

[Ruth]

Exactly love! You have said so well...humanity needs to see this...flaws can only lead to improvement like 0 can lead to 1 lol
I love your work...always surprising and fresh...open hearts and minds may get burnt time to time but least we can be free of prejudice ey?
Hugs
xx

[Fairy Willow]

Amen!! We are who we are, nobody can change that. So its time for breaking the habit and accepting people. Even if they dont fall into a perfectly conceived notion. Fab write and spot on. Respect. :)

[Audrey Howitt]

Step outside the circle and see what we have been missing. Lovely poem!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Right on with this write!

[Yina]

I love this!! I've never liked these "circles" but I know, I myself, am in one at that moment:/ Thanks for a great poem!