about a girl(s)

her name was Anna/Ally/Haley, 

we shared a bed once/twice/a thousand times �" 

i didn’t know what i felt for her

denied how i felt for her

only realized in looking back what i felt for her, 

it has been years since i’ve seen her but she has stuck with me; 

a moment/a year/an adolescence spent 

with my heart in my throat looking at her, 

clammy hands unsure of 

how to touch her

am i allowed to touch her

would it be wrong to touch her? 

Reviews

[Ashley]

Nice. I liked the effect the slashes gave. Although, next time capitalise your i's?