It all began with ..... YOU?

It all began with ..... YOU?

A Poem by silent poet
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sometimes you get a glance into what you can't explain but know inside you need to.. something about you,

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I found myself thinking about you last night. I then stopped or should I say,told myself after asking myself (what am I doing?)
Have you ever not met someone but one word or glance has you drawn to them? Even quite a distance away so knowing you'll never truly be able to meet them. well,that's where I'm at. This place is not new but nice. Familiar but different! I woke up feeling like yesterday and everyday before that didn't seem to matter as much anymore. Telling myself (stop!,This isn't real.Why bother to allow myself to feel?) 


I wondered If I told you I'd like to get to know you, would it matter. As I write this I wonder will you know it's you as you read this. I just want to know more about you, All about you. The way your words just pour, the pictures you paint, the places I take myself within your scripts! Then I see how childish and how juvenile I sound. (what am I doing?) I just want to know you, I don't know why but when I find the words *...* 

You'll be able to tell me If I should of kept them between me. Between you, hmm (let me stop) *thoughts* I'm too old to be feeling like a school girl, life how it passes just wanting to enjoy what I feel but how when I never even met you....
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© 2015 silent poet


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a lovely piece of writing, I love how I can totally relate to your feelings towards this YOU...your talented and amazing..i love the conversation you are having with yourself here,

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

8 Years Ago

Why thank you rubee, I truly appreciate that.. And it was just one of those things.. Unexpectedly my.. read more
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This is REAL and I like that! You are excellent at expressing yourself in a real and personal way and many women can relate to this. Awesome stuff, my dear :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much lynn.. I appreciate that so much. you know that seems to scare people :)( real a.. read more
its a good write....better be careful tho, f**k around and get you inbox flooded with random people thinkin its about them lol j/p

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

dope, ill go listen to it now
BLitZeD

8 Years Ago

nice i like it, i like it ... n u should be lol :)
silent poet

8 Years Ago

:) :) :) I'm very happy you like it! and lol chea, that's what's really good. you're dope!
This really encompasses the feelings of confusion that love and attraction can bring, especially from a female perspective. Very good expression. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

8 Years Ago

Thank you Krystal very much :)
Lovely words of inner expression

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

silent poet

8 Years Ago

Thank you Gerry, :)

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