Black Creature Of Shadow Mountain

Black Creature Of Shadow Mountain

A Poem by Sean M. Addams
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made up my own creature and legend behind it so hope you enjoy kind of on the dark and creepy side but not as graphic as some of my pieces...

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Through the mountain tops
The deadly legend will rise
A black creature with fangs
With yellow glowing eyes
It has spikes across its back
A midnight colored mane
Terror bleeds in its claws
It’s the new vision of pain
It hides the caves
Blends in with the dark
Feels the chills against your skin
With its moonlight hellish bark
It sneaks up from behind
Surprises you with one fatal whack
No time to run
As it jumps on top and begins to attack
Bites you with pointed teeth
Then begins to rip you apart
Bloods pours from its jaws
As it chomps down on your heart
The black creature of Shadow Mountain
Becomes a myth of this haunted place
Climb up towards the clouds of hell
Staring death right in the face!
 

© 2009 Sean M. Addams


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What a scary write, what a scary creature, what an awesome pic to accompany it all!
Yikes, and I have to go in now and sleep by myself...NOT FAIR...where are my doggies????
I am scared this thing will get me in the night...

If I am not on the Cafe again then you know this creature has gotten me....smiles.........Oh no, I see yellow fire and yellow eyes in the hall......Sean, it's all your fault!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I can sort of picture the creature you were describing, but at the same time, i had a hard time shaping it together. overall though, its a very good write, thanks for sharing it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very amazing creature. I love this poem very much. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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this is pretty scary -- the imagery is awesome. :) the words you use are quite pleasant, and so is the rhyme scheme.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very creepy poem.
Last line was pure gold.
What a scary way to end a poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My yikers sean! Your imagination is so extreem and fantastic i wonder what it would be like if you decided to make a movie.. Probably smashing sucess, that's what! This was a creeper for sure.. Now all the lights stay on, thank ya very much!!!! LOL

WOW!

Mags xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Wouldn't it be amazing if all the creatures you create actually do come to life? Your imagination is one of a kind, Sean. Interesting how you use the term 'clouds of hell' as hell is taking the elevator down. Or is it?

I need a hug now cause I'm scared :-) Really, though, excellent work with a brilliant descriptive flair. I agree with Michael in that you are a master of horror, among other wonderful things...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awsome and mysterious sean, you never cease to amaze me my friend, and here you describe the legend, the creature of shadow mountain, i would love to read more off this, as well. and as always frightening, but subtle enough to give the readers a shiver before they look away, master of horror, keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It has spikes across its back
A midnight colored mane
Terror bleeds in its claws
It's the new vision of pain

ooohhhhhhhh this is a creepy creature to be sure one I would not like

to run into on a dark night~ scary to the max! Great Pen my friend!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Wow! Cool and dark. Great imagery and written well. A very creative write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You create an amazing atmosphere of legend come to life. This is a dynamic, wonderful write that is loaded with dark imagery. Thanks for sharing your talent here!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Sean M. Addams

Davidson, NC



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" border="0"> I started writing when I was five but didn't take it seriously until 15 . I wanted to express what I was working on in art class on paper and poetry was the best outlet. I was fir.. more..

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