I am what i am

you can like me 

 you can hate me

you can choose to think what you want 

For i am who i am and i dont care

Cuss me out

talk s*** behind my back or to my face

For i am what i am and i could care less. 

I am what I am and i will never change

 I love things most hate,

The flowers grow black in my world, 

It is a dark and daring world i live in. 

take a step, i dare you into my twisted, loving, 

daring, hole that will never end. 

I stand head held high, 

For i am what i have made myself, 

i walk the streets of darkness, 

no doors open to me, for i shut them all and shatter the glass as it lays on the sidewalk for you all to walk on after me.

I laugh, a deep dark evil laugh, 

for come to me children, 

I shall show you the world of my mazed mind, 

rabbits with no head, mechanical bodies,

dark skies over head, threaten to throw daggers at you

I  am a rose stem with sharp thorns, 

becareful ill stab you deeply if you press to hard on my heart. 

I am what i am and for what i am is human, 

tears shed like a down pour, watering the most harshest of mud, 

my anger flows like lighting, flashes here and there, for do not stand near, i shall stike you dead. 

Reviews

[Graceful]

very good.

[TAO]

Lawdy lawd... This was pretty morbid. I like it, though. Great great stuff, Ms.

[YouoweYoupay]

spooky write. Interesting.

[.]

Love your first stanza, I had something similar to this when I first started writing here. Awesome writing!

[~BlueSkyy~]

Very nice. :]
I love how it's written.
Everyone sees the world differenty.
I like the way the person (I'm not quite sure if it's you), sees the world as an endless hole.
This is very deep.
'I am who I am and I will never change'

[Charles]

Sounds like you were feeling bold and audacious when you wrote this. Honesty is always appreciated. Good read.

[Coyote Poetry]

"I am a rose stem with sharp thorns, " The poem is amazing. I like so many lines in this poem. Sometime we need to be left to figure what we want and where we want to be. I like the ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[RIO]

Dark and intruiging...
Liked the part about "tears...watering the most hardest of mud"...
It was great. Well done.
x

[Marshall Hanson]

The devil is in choice. I like your boldness in this poem and how true it is we make or selves. Great work.

[Cassiopia Summers]

And that's all anybody could ask for! (:

So QUICK RANDOM question since I see you live in Grand Junction CO, would you happen to know Cody Demarco? He is also often known as MJ. He is my Older brother and he lives there also.