You Took that

The Blood boils in my veins at the site of your face

Closing my eyes is not possible

My anger that resides inside, bubbling and brewing

For I wish you to suffer

The roses don't bloom here, there is only madness

How Dare You 

Steal what was not yours in the first place

You took that from me

My only line of defense taken, stripped and stomped on 

You took my innocence with you 

When you stole that kiss, that was not yours to have

You took me as a victim 

But i come back stronger, more able, head held high

YOU can never take from me again 

What was not yours to take in the first place!! 

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I really love the emotions you can feel fuming from the poem. Its a really good poem, and it seems that you've put alot of thought into the right words. Wonderful work.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

This is great, I can tell you put a lot of anger and passion into this poem! its strong and the flow is great! i really like it!

[Dark Empress]

Wow, that's really good. I love the line there is only madness. Amazing poem. Great write, girlie. :)

[J.M]

Wow - the anger and power of this piece is stunning. I particularly like 'The roses don't bloom here, there is only madness'. Good job!

[X]

wow, that hit like a hammer to brittle glass! very emotional with a sense of hatred i love this! anger conspiring with hate cteates a beautiful image in my mind... Excellent write

[Toon]

emotional. inspiring. i like it.

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brutal..but defiant!

[Graceful]

...whoa...thats deep. I LOVED IT> beautiful. well writtnen. Bravo!