It's time

Wake up

its time to play

Wake up

Its time to toy

Wake up

Its time to kill

Wake up

Its time to slice open

Wake up

its time to plundge that kinfe so deep

Wake up

its time to....

 

Die

Reviews

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

wow dark and deep but still brilliant.

~SK

[Cafe Reader]

Oh wow! Very creative!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Interesting...at first I was thinking it was a dog or a kid playing awake the adults...but no. oh no. nice twist!

[{K}]

Holy crap. This is dark.....scary movie flashback..........Good write.

[Weasley]

Dark but awesome

[Nothing Personal]

Wow How Ho. What a powerful, venomous write.You could slowly see the venom getting stronger , the poem making a deep incision into you. Very Dark & enraged...

[JanieB]

Oh boy...

[Wondering Mind]

Ouch..Some dangerous game to play

[Coyote Poetry]

This remind me of a bad cowboy movie. Like life is short and death is near. Wake up with death whispering in your ear. Best run to the west. The strong wind will keep you safe. A straight to the point poem. Death will come in enough time. Better to look for a good dance pardner and some good wine. Death will find us soon enough.
Coyote

[sarah]

SCARY!!!!!!!!!!!