hearts

Heart  wings flutter wildly

Huddled tightly

Afraid to be chosen

The fragileness of them

 

Scared of the dark

The shadows of hurt 

The screams of pain 

 

Thunderous sounds

make the hearts jump

fleeing from their hold

 

Dancing in the warmth

of the fire that rises and falls

sparks hit them in the middle

making the hearts flutter with a glow

 

Reviews

[Lauren Beth]

So creative...i really love the first stanza. I can really feel it. Our hearts are afraid of letting go and getting hurt, crushed because they are so fragile...but ultimately fly out and take that chance to be "Dancing in the warmth"...really great write.

[Coyote Poetry]

The heart is a part of us we won't ever understand. Make us want to dance in the heat of a love. Can blind us in sadness too. Your poem is beautiful. I like the description and the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Cute 1]

theres not much 2 say except i loved it

[HopelesslyDevoted]

the words in this poem are so brilliantly arranged. they give me butterflies in my mind. lol very nice!

[floarealbastra10]

beautifuly said

[Morgan]

(:

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[Adrien Hupp]

i love how it flows, it creates such a vivid mental picture. good job:D

[Wondering Mind]

this is very good, the idea is very clever.