whispers of an angel

Standing still

Motionless 

Their eyes curious

He stands apart

Whispering to her

Blonde hair with the slightest of curls

Chrystal blue eyes

The heart behind the walls

 

whispers of promises

of love

Promises of deep emotion

An enternal life as one together

 

She sits upon the cold bed

The tears of angels fall

the covers are the only comfort for her

 

Whispers of promises stop

Feelings of calming gone

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You create a sad vision. A Angel with a broken heart leave the Angel wishing for a better day. A excellent poem. I like the description and the sad story.
Coyote

[Geralyn Miller]

Ah, yes, some men never can be trusted with a woman's loving heart. You are a gifted writer of truth.

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Wow this poem is different but different is good..

~SK

[sarah]

oooo interesting!

[Wondering Mind]

not all whispers have the same tone

[Cassiopia Summers]

Definitely sounds like something out of a movie. Great write. (^:

[HopelesslyDevoted]

oh i think i know which movie this is from. great movie, even better poem! this is eery, dark, suspenseful, and intriguing. loved reading this. great write!

[JanieB]

"Whispers of promises".. very good. Sums it up well.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

This is like scene from vampire movie...and romantic :)

[Morgan]

i like this one! i felt the emotion put into it!