Given

Bodies become alive

Skin grows back

blood flows through the once deadly veins

Slowly the heart beats its song

The nife emerges from the inside

Blood given back to the body

Smiles come forth

hugs given

Talks are a million

 

Sorries are never heard of

the sun shines brightly

the nights are of no more

Death is never heard of

Nothing is taken for granted

Life is of happiness

Given no ponder

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

this poem is a backwards poem.. tell me how i did

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting format for the poem. Gave me many things to think about in your words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Jonathan]

Pretty interesting, but I think you forgot a
Killer k for nife.

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

I love it nice job.

~SK

[Claude]

This is a brilliant symbol of recovery and a return to wellness in my mind. Well done!

[sarah]

whoa! mind officially blown!

[Wondering Mind]

Rewind

[Cassiopia Summers]

I have to agree with Angelina Paige, it's insanely cool. It's different from what I read from you, but it's great.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, this is an insanely cool poem! i love the concept of a backwards poem. actually i think it makes a bigger impact on the reader than the regular poems do. it brings ones attention on things we would think about otherwise.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh, you are so good! it`s really great .....I love the idea of such poem!

[KAREN]

backwards is good sometimes and you did it good! Nice read!