April

Her heart beats to my every touch

Her smile makes my butterflies flutter

The oceans waves crash into the earth's sands 

As we crash against the bed, fingers laced together

Night stars twinkle 

Her body rises to my fingers traces 

Bumps of panting and shivers run through her skin

Heat flows through my lips

Electricity radiating through our finger tips 

Winds of passion cry out in her pleasure

Whirling around us, enclosed to the nights seductiveness 

Caged and chained to the lovers dance

waking in the Sun's smiles 

She's next to me, living in dreams of fantasy 

hair fallen from the heat and passion of the night before 

My world is complete

shes laying next to me in my arms.

 

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

a perfect work of passion.
"The oceans waves crash into the earth's sands
As we crash against the bed" was a smasher line to sum up the effects of converging on to your lover..Heat and electric references make it all the more steamy..Good job !! quite liked it..

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and emotion. I like the use of nature and love to strengthen the poem.
"Night stars twinkle
Her body rises to my fingers traces
Bumps of panting and shivers run through her skin
Heat flows through my lips
Electricity radiating through our finger tips "
I like the strong statements and the ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

god this amazing!! gave me chills and goose bumps from the very first stanza! i'm in love with this!!

[Dream Weaver]

A very sensual piece of writing filled
with emotive pleasure! Nicely done...