hitthefan : Writing

A first draft of the first paragraph

A first draft of the first paragraph

A Story by hitthefan


just want some feedback on this thing i wrote, it's not finished (obviously) and i don't even know where I'm going with it, but I'll try to write some..
this is just something I wrote in about 30 minutes

this is just something I wrote in about 30 minutes..

A Story by hitthefan


this may or may not be the beginning of something longer and better constructive critisism is apprichiated