Smiles Across Your Face

My wife's sunrise smile

Droplets dew settle sweet
Upon a flower gentle sway

Cricket's empathy to the nightress sings

Symphonies which chorus soon negates

Darkness surrenders into full retreat
Withdraws shadow from woodland's bush and glade
To a new found dawn; rhapsody with fresh wet paints
Lending more to 'tis morning's coming grace

 

Sky red; a mistress blush
A rising star blowing warm kisses feint
Beams and winks and such
Sets felicity up, atop this unveiling stage 
 

But yet, a greater anticipation awaits
Than the dawn out yonder which heaven breaks
As the sunrise pales in comparison to the brighter
Summer smile now waking rapture across your face

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Oh this should win you some big points with the missus Mike, very luverly, especially love...

Invites felicity upon the stage grandeur of the coming day

What a grand thought, nicely pen'd.

[Michael G. Smith]

I've won so many points I'm years ahead. Now it's her turn.