Building Wildflowers

my version of how wildflowers are made

Imps tinkering

Beneath the blades

Building wildflowers

Reviews

[TheUnrulyWriter]

So short and whimsical!! It's light and happy, which many writers can have difficulty capturing. Adding this one to favorites!!! :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks. I wanted to add more but something told me it would dilute the notion.

[Norman 223]

Just like those wild flowers, these impromptu thoughts can "pop up" without any special nurturing, but the quality is just as good.
Imps = impetuous.
N.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks, especially for your ingenious with within your comment.

[Woody]

I'm always astounded by the ability of some poets to express an idea with so few words.
I like this one, M.

[Michael G. Smith]

Yeah, I wrote more to this but, more is always better. I felt the other verses I had were more filler and detracted from the power of the first stanza. The madness is this stuff just pops into our heads and we better write it down before it disappearshows forever.

[Michael G. Smith]

Isn't always better