My Eyes See Through Time

My eyes
See through time
Only when
I look at you
Yet, when
I peer
Into the mirror
They always
Accelerate the view

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Short sweet and beautiful :)
Quite romantic i think.
I enoyed it :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank you Chimmy. It's inspiration is a real love with a great woman, my wife Milagros.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Awwww so sweet. :)

[Kesha]

This short & such a sweet write. Nicely penned :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Truth usually is, right? Thank you for stopping by my little table in the corner of the cafe, lol.

[Kesha]

That's right haha. & you are welcome, I'm very much liking your writing style, in all honesty too.

[Michael G. Smith]

Please critique my new poem I just posted last hour. The perfectionist me is saying it's not finished because it don't feel just right. I'm craving feedback. Spanish hair in the moonlight. Thanks.

[Kesha]

Alright I will check it out here :)

[Lydia Shutter]

When you look at the one you love, you do not see the wrinkles or the scars time left. You see the smile, the twinkling eyes, the love coming back at you. However, we are our own worst enemies and when we see ourselves in the mirror, we are quite critical! This is my take on your words. Lydi**

[Michael G. Smith]

You nailed it! It's so nice to have intelligent people such as yourself here. Thank you for stopping by my table here at the cafe.

[Lydia Shutter]

You are quite welcome. Glad I understood your meaning! Lydi**