ice

yupp its deffinately a poem.

Glistening ice on a frozen tree is keeping

me in an unknown trance.

the orangish, sweet colored street light seems

to make things come to life.  The colors dance.

I can only see this beauty one season

out of every year.  I believe all this I see

is nothing shorter than a miracle.

It brightens your whole world.  It helps to be

out in the middle of this light, guiding

you to a joyous place.  Forget about your

problems and troubles that leaves you lying

here.  As the sun glistens, it melts your

fantasy.  It's a world filled with changing

things.  It's the only thing letting me be

different, unique, like I can shine.  It

should help brighten the world.  Make all see

its beauty for once.  It's the broken

branch that's wishing to be free again.  Ready to dance

in the breeze with all the blooming things.

Begging to be free from pain, coming out of a trance,

Glistening ice is melting all your pain away.

 

Author's Note

i always love writing.... ...i love everyone to be imaginative so this poem is to the people with the silly minds.

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

Unique and cool. Great job on this.

[The Analog Kid]

I like the last line, "Glistening ice is melting all your pain away." How cool, ice is melting your pain! Nice concept.

Pat