no more hope

She had no hope

and cutting was her only way to cope

her hope was washed away

with the things you said to her everyday

no one knew she held sadness within

she had hope that she could win

but that little hope disapeared 

she was useless just as she feared 

she knew she had no more hope

so, she ended her life with a rope 

Reviews

[Sari Segale]

Suicide in every line, lost my daughter to suicide when she was 16, your writing says it all, so sad and hopeless,powerful and honest