take,mistake

take,mistake

A Poem by shane
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song

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Take, mistake
 
All those times I felt I lost
Like I could never win
I kept everyone out
And started
Towards the end
I thought I was doing right
Thought I was protecting myself
Keeping you out
When I should have let you in
 
Rising from the ashes
A new day shining bright
The mistakes are brushed away
As your lips brush up against my face
Rising from the ashes
A new day shining bright
The mistakes are brushed away
As your lips touch mine
 
I felt I was alone
I felt my world was dead
I thought no one could see me
As I hid inside my shell
I thought I was doing fine
I thought I could make it by
Keeping you out
When I should’ve let you in
 
Rising from the ashes
A new day shining bright
The mistakes are brushed away
As your lips brush up against my face
Rising from the ashes
A new day shining bright
The mistakes are brushed away
As your lips touch mine
 
And now I'm rising from the ashes
Into a new day shining bright
My mistakes are blown away
As we walk hand in hand

© 2008 shane


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Added on October 7, 2008
Last Updated on October 8, 2008

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shane
shane

galway, Ireland



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Shane, 21 Years old so far. Most of what i post on here are lyrics, i should say that i have never really been interested in poetry, the first poem i wrote was written last year ('09) i found you, .. more..

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A Poem by shane