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back together

back together

A Poem by shane
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you know that scene in the bourne supremacy, where his girlfriend gets shot and the crashes into the river , ya well that was a main source of inspiration for this one.

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Back together
I watched you fall, I tried to follow
I watched you hit the water below
I watched you sink
Sink down under swallowing too much too cope
I dived in after you; I tried to reach the depths
You’ve dropped too
I swam as far as I could
But you’re falling too fast for me
 
 
I got you by the hand I tried to get you out
I tried so hard I nearly died myself
It hurts so much to see you down here
I got you so close but you stopped moving
I tried to hold but my lungs were bursting
I pulled you close and kissed you goodbye
 
 
It was like a car crash it all happened so fast
One moment we were laughing
The next you were falling fast
I was here the whole time
Why didn’t you ask me for help?
Why didn’t you hold me if you knew you were slipping
 
 
I had you by the hand I tried to get you out
I tried so hard I nearly died myself
It hurts so much to see you down here
I got you so close but you stopped moving
I tried to hold but my lungs were bursting
I pulled you close and kissed you goodbye
 
 
I'll take on the world for you
For your memory
For the times we’ll never have again
I'll take on the gods for you
If it means I can bring you back
I know I believe in fate
But it wasn’t your time
It all happened too fast
I'll take my own life for you
If it we’ll be back together
 

© 2009 shane


Author's Note

shane
some editing is needed, punctuation and so on, i probably will change bits in the near future sometime,
it was all written and finished in less than half an hour, however it is 4:25 in the morning and sleep deprivation is getting the best of my thinking mind ...

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Whoa dude, that is awesome. :) We have like, the same style of writing. Was this based on a true event? Well, anyways, ur story was absolutely perfect! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 2, 2009

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shane
shane

galway, Ireland



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Shane, 21 Years old so far. Most of what i post on here are lyrics, i should say that i have never really been interested in poetry, the first poem i wrote was written last year ('09) i found you, .. more..

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A Poem by shane