I Can't Be Your Friend

Reviews

[Allan]

Great
Great in meaning, as well as writing
Images also, but it is a bit fast moving for me as I like reading poems slooowly.
But overall it is great
Thnx

[Ama May Cooper]

The poem itself was nice and shows a deep but true emotion. but the way you have preseneted it makes it slightly hard to read but its still an interesting idea

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

First off love the whole set up, that is really spectacular.... the poem itself is really beautiful in a bittersweet way... it is hard to be friends with someone you have feelings for.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Beautiful job.. highly inspirational and well understood! So many emotions do flow with intoxicating love.. it sometimes makes it impossible to be friends after a relationship ends. Just too many feelings to return to the simple emotions of friendship. Friendships can be deep but do not flow to the depths of a romantic and deep relationship. I loved this one immensely.. found it very creative.. full of purpose and deep feelings contained within a deep lover's heart, mind, soul and body. I can relate to this very much.. and you did a fantastic job of putting this together in a collage of written and visual art. Thank you so much for sharing .. =)