Alone

I wake up

No one calls

I go alone

No one accompanies

I travel home

No one greets

I visit

No one is there

I do the work

No one overlooks

I eat my share

They don’t

I go to bed

No one comes

I cry aloud

For their souls.

Reviews

[TheLoneWriter]

I love how you expressed the loneliness and I love how in only a few lines you spoke so much and it meant a lot and I could feel the emotions from your writing! Very well written!!

[Essa G]

Thanks, it's always great to hear a nice comment :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The way you address this is felt in your lines --- by using irony to the depths of what is...like the title of the verse: "Alone"...this depicts much for the reader to look into each stanza and take each event like you're the person experiencing the events as they unfold...

[Essa G]

Thanks, always good to hear a nice review :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...