The Dead Pond

The Dead Pond

A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.

A little girl
Lived a normal night
Bright bouncy ponytails
Everything was all right
She loved to play castle
Act like a princess
No slaves
She thought it was fantastic
"Badadadahhh here comes the princess" 
She says making her way
With a white blowing dress
Flying in the wind
A day never went by 
Where she wasn't pretending
She was a quiet kid
Kept to herself
Which was regretted
She went to play house
One day
Down by the pond, you say
She had fallen in
Not knowing how it was like to swim
Drowning
Down
She went
All the way to the bottom
She had left us with a smile upon her face
She was known for being
Generous
Brave
She always thought it would be okay 

© 2012 Oh Wow, Lovely.


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Poor girl, made me feel bad. I connected to it, nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Wow, Lovely.

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
such a deep write, so emotional. Well expressed

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Wow, Lovely.

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Deep and dark. Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Wow, Lovely.

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!:)
:(

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh my God. This is really good. Seriously. It is quite deep and refects on how sometimes innocence and death can go hand in hand.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 17, 2012
Last Updated on September 18, 2012
Tags: tehe, princess, dolls, girl, drowning, death, sad, one direction, no, jk, death.

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Oh Wow, Lovely.
Oh Wow, Lovely.

Bristol , United Kingdom



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~~I don't know why I am the way I am. Something makes me hate everything. Light up, Smoke up, Shut the F**k Up.I'm officially off the rails, you should try it. A little more of her is gone, I can see .. more..

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A Poem by Oh Wow, Lovely.



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